The Mad At - the official mad-at-theory thread - Thread

[pauln]

The forum is just intrinsically mad, wether explicit or tacit, caused by deep seeded irrational, neurotic, elitist contempt for certain topics.

Cue a pauln haiku..

It practically writes itself...?

Jazz forum just intrinsically mad,
Dark Winter thoughts follow Fall of theory.
Ear remains irrational, neurotic, elitist.

[Mick-7]

It practically writes itself...?

Jazz forum just intrinsically mad,
Dark Winter thoughts follow Fall of theory.
Ear remains irrational, neurotic, elitist.

Much too wordy....

One of haiku’s defining characteristics is its concise structure. If a poem doesn’t follow this structure, it’s not a haiku—at least in the traditional sense.

In English, the structure is:
Line 1: Five syllables
Line 2: Seven syllables
Line 3: Five syllables

A haiku often features an image, or a pair of images, meant to depict the essence of a specific moment in time.

Even with insects
some can sing,
some can’t.
- Issa

To write a blues song
is to regiment riots
and pluck gems from graves.
- Etheridge Knight

[AllanAllen]

I ate the whole can
The room smells like a bad egg
Beans beans magical

[pamosmusic]

Bobby Timmons thinks
Everyone is mad, but he’s
The maddest of all

[Bobby Timmons]

When ur mad ur mad.

https://www.youtube.com/watch/iIC6r-qSGNE

[Bobby Timmons]

I admit I'm mad at rhythms
I try to jam with regular notes and soul rhythms and I can't do it
Tony traumatized me
I need complex notes
Mad at rhythms

[AllanAllen]

Rhythms you say?

Rhythms Complete Bugs Bower

[pauln]

Much too wordy....

One of haiku’s defining characteristics is its concise structure. If a poem doesn’t follow this structure, it’s not a haiku—at least in the traditional sense.

In English, the structure is:
Line 1: Five syllables
Line 2: Seven syllables
Line 3: Five syllables

A haiku often features an image, or a pair of images, meant to depict the essence of a specific moment in time.

You are correct Sir.
I need syllables not words
For Haiku structure.

[pamosmusic]

I admit I'm mad at rhythms
I try to jam with regular notes and soul rhythms and I can't do it
Tony traumatized me
I need complex notes
Mad at rhythms

The number of syllables in this haiku confirms that you're mad at rhythms.

[Bobby Timmons]

I'm the one who originally told pauln he hadn't written a correct haiku when he first posed one. So I know the form of a haiku. Was doing a goofy pauln one.

[Bobby Timmons]

I don't understand
My pp wants an ainy
And not a male one

[pauln]

I'm the one who originally told pauln he hadn't written a correct haiku when he first posed one. So I know the form of a haiku. Was doing a goofy pauln one.

Yes, yours was the original correction but I did not catch the syllables count.
I am now reformed; all my future offerings will be True, Good, and Beautiful.