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  1. #26

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bobby Timmons View Post
    The forum is just intrinsically mad, wether explicit or tacit, caused by deep seeded irrational, neurotic, elitist contempt for certain topics.

    Cue a pauln haiku..
    It practically writes itself...?

    Jazz forum just intrinsically mad,
    Dark Winter thoughts follow Fall of theory.
    Ear remains irrational, neurotic, elitist.

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  3. #27

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    Quote Originally Posted by pauln View Post
    It practically writes itself...?

    Jazz forum just intrinsically mad,
    Dark Winter thoughts follow Fall of theory.
    Ear remains irrational, neurotic, elitist.
    Much too wordy....

    One of haiku’s defining characteristics is its concise structure. If a poem doesn’t follow this structure, it’s not a haiku—at least in the traditional sense.

    In English, the structure is:
    Line 1: Five syllables
    Line 2: Seven syllables
    Line 3: Five syllables

    A haiku often features an image, or a pair of images, meant to depict the essence of a specific moment in time.


    Even with insects
    some can sing,
    some can’t.
    - Issa

    To write a blues song
    is to regiment riots
    and pluck gems from graves.
    - Etheridge Knight

  4. #28

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    I ate the whole can
    The room smells like a bad egg
    Beans beans magical

  5. #29

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    Bobby Timmons thinks
    Everyone is mad, but he’s
    The maddest of all

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  7. #31

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    I admit I'm mad at rhythms
    I try to jam with regular notes and soul rhythms and I can't do it
    Tony traumatized me
    I need complex notes
    Mad at rhythms

  8. #32

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    Rhythms you say?

    Rhythms Complete Bugs Bower

  9. #33

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mick-7 View Post
    Much too wordy....

    One of haiku’s defining characteristics is its concise structure. If a poem doesn’t follow this structure, it’s not a haiku—at least in the traditional sense.

    In English, the structure is:
    Line 1: Five syllables
    Line 2: Seven syllables
    Line 3: Five syllables

    A haiku often features an image, or a pair of images, meant to depict the essence of a specific moment in time.
    You are correct Sir.
    I need syllables not words
    For Haiku structure.

  10. #34

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bobby Timmons View Post
    I admit I'm mad at rhythms
    I try to jam with regular notes and soul rhythms and I can't do it
    Tony traumatized me
    I need complex notes
    Mad at rhythms
    The number of syllables in this haiku confirms that you're mad at rhythms.

  11. #35

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    I'm the one who originally told pauln he hadn't written a correct haiku when he first posed one. So I know the form of a haiku. Was doing a goofy pauln one.

  12. #36

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    I don't understand
    My pp wants an ainy
    And not a male one


  13. #37

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bobby Timmons View Post
    I'm the one who originally told pauln he hadn't written a correct haiku when he first posed one. So I know the form of a haiku. Was doing a goofy pauln one.
    Yes, yours was the original correction but I did not catch the syllables count.
    I am now reformed; all my future offerings will be True, Good, and Beautiful.