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Originally Posted by Bobby Timmons
Jazz forum just intrinsically mad,
Dark Winter thoughts follow Fall of theory.
Ear remains irrational, neurotic, elitist.
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09-20-2024 12:19 PM
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Originally Posted by pauln
One of haiku’s defining characteristics is its concise structure. If a poem doesn’t follow this structure, it’s not a haiku—at least in the traditional sense.
In English, the structure is:
Line 1: Five syllables
Line 2: Seven syllables
Line 3: Five syllables
A haiku often features an image, or a pair of images, meant to depict the essence of a specific moment in time.
Even with insects
some can sing,
some can’t.
- Issa
To write a blues song
is to regiment riots
and pluck gems from graves.
- Etheridge Knight
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I ate the whole can
The room smells like a bad egg
Beans beans magical
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Bobby Timmons thinks
Everyone is mad, but he’s
The maddest of all
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When ur mad ur mad.
https://www.youtube.com/watch/iIC6r-qSGNE
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I admit I'm mad at rhythms
I try to jam with regular notes and soul rhythms and I can't do it
Tony traumatized me
I need complex notes
Mad at rhythms
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Rhythms you say?
Rhythms Complete Bugs Bower
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Originally Posted by Mick-7
I need syllables not words
For Haiku structure.
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Originally Posted by Bobby Timmons
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I'm the one who originally told pauln he hadn't written a correct haiku when he first posed one. So I know the form of a haiku. Was doing a goofy pauln one.
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I don't understand
My pp wants an ainy
And not a male one
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Originally Posted by Bobby Timmons
I am now reformed; all my future offerings will be True, Good, and Beautiful.
Gibson N225?
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