Looking for feedback on my playing (stella and green dolphin street)

[kpack]

Recorded these with a quartet (drums, guitar, bass and trombone)...looking for people to critique what I am doing and give me some feed back...positive or negative. The link is below...ignore all the other tracks btw.


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[emmadet]

hmm we're well into the bone solo before the band locks in. You could give more direction, take more responsibility. Bone takes one chorus too much maybe but that's how it always is. I like how the drummer goes to the cymbal 8 bars before your 2nd chorus, unusual. I like how you recycle that little descending phrase e-d-c#-a into f-eb-d-bb at the top of your 2nd chorus. That's the Sonny way, always make further use of what you just did. Or as Scott H says, do it again! and then, why not do it again! I like how you don't reach above your chops, but just keep calm. A few more formspecific releases would suit my taste better though. Shit I'm sounding like a critic here. Do the whole thing again. That was stella btw. Cheers



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[Noox]

nice groove on OGDS. on that song especially everything really "gels" and comes together. I like the variety playing of the drummer to, it keeps everything from getting old

[skei]

OGDS really hits my buttons! Love the guitar sound too, great.
That made my day!
Peace
Skei (the just had coffee and enjoyed some nice music one)