Hi, great that you posted your clip.
You have great chops and smooth technic. I can hear you have played a lot of rock, I mean that in a positive way. Nothing fague.
You start all your lines on the 1 of the first bar, fill them up with 8ths until somewhere into the third bar. There you end your lines. After a while that gets predictable, even you play fast triplets or whatever scale note's.
Try breaking this concept i.e. play a long note in bar 1, or in bar 2. and stop in bar 2 or 4 or drag it over the 4 bars. The ear will get refreshed in its frasing.
Hope it helps.
Hans |