Who can help me checking my compositions

[yago11]

I started to compose shortly recent, and I am looking for musicians who can help me checking my compositions ( i made them by guitar pro, you just need to hear the midi) and telling me if the harmony is ok, or how can I improve them.

Thanx

[kenbennett]

Post one. We're all interested.

[yago11]

They are midi files, how can I post ot here?
thanx

[fep]

In the showcase section you can create a "Tune in Progress:" thread. Go have a look to see what others have done.

If you want good critiques you'll have to make a recording and post a lead sheet or a score. Can't you convert your midi to a mp3 file?

[Drumbler]

You spelled "checking" wrong.

That's one mistake.

[yago11]

Originally Posted by fep

In the showcase section you can create a "Tune in Progress:" thread. Go have a look to see what others have done.

If you want good critiques you'll have to make a recording and post a lead sheet or a score. Can't you convert your midi to a mp3 file?

I dont know how, but i can send midi files and guitar pro files to emails for example

[yago11]

Here are the chords,you can play them in programs as band in abox, i guess u have it.

G# l G l F# l F l
A#m l Cm l D#m l G l
C#m l F#7 l G# l C dim
A#dim l C#m l Cm lD#dim

G# l G l F# l F l
A#m l Cm l D#m l G l
C#m l F#7 l G# l C dim
A#dim l C#m l D#l G#

[yago11]

http://www.goear.com/listen/5d6d858/flying-to-the-moon-yago11
well here is a recording i did with my guitar, the sound quality is not good, but u can hear the notes, the higher ntoes sounds awful, but well u can figure out mmore or less how is the song.
I used a spanish old guitar, and a micro only for voice :s

[DINOEL GANDINI]

Pls send the midi files to my email address. tks

[bobguitar]

Originally Posted by yago11

Here are the chords,you can play them in programs as band in abox, i guess u have it.

G# l G l F# l F l
A#m l Cm l D#m l G l
C#m l F#7 l G# l C dim
A#dim l C#m l Cm lD#dim

G# l G l F# l F l
A#m l Cm l D#m l G l
C#m l F#7 l G# l C dim
A#dim l C#m l D#l G#

Hi Yago! Don't write G#, write Ab, and stick to flats as much as you can, as long as you are writing in Ab. And I am guessing, if you are writing jazz, that you missed out some sevenths. I also don't really follow the logic behind the chord progressions, I think you need to have an Eb7 at the end of the first section to link to the Ab starting the next. And I think C dim should be F7 (almost the same thing, as many others will tell you). Hope this helps. Here's my suggestion for the first half:

Ab l G7 l Gb7 l F7 l
Bbm l Cm l Ebm l G l (man, this line seems really strange to me, but I might be an old fogey :-)
Dbm l Gb7 l Ab l F7
Bbdim l Dbm l Cm lEb7

Bob